The Beast In Me

As I listen to the rain hitting the tin roof

All I can think about

Is me and you,

In such a short time

How long we have come

When will be the time,

That we meet face to face

And become to enjoy

Each others embrace,

I have the patience to wait

Because good things come to those that do

But I'm falling in a blissful state,

That I can't explain

But in time I know

The beast in me 

You will be able to tame.

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

The expression in this piece leaves one to wander to many places. I can picture an online romance, a long distance relationship and/or a fear of of diving in. Very intuitive to keep the reader in such imagination. I love the expression and the way you had just enough vague description to keep the reader guessing and sending us off into a world where we can draw our our own vivid conclusions. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work. Please return the favor by reviewing one of my pieces.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Briana

[Lover Of Words]

A piece so breathtaking you give me the chills

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Kelsey

[TPK Stories]

u captured my feeling as I wait for my guy...the impatience i feel makes me feel anything but human...great job...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Valerie

[Cory Barrett]

And if the beast falls for the beauty of what we cannot help but love, then we are domesticated.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Cory

[Coyote Poetry]

Fasting in love make the love stronger and better. I like the hope and yearning in the words. A perfect ending to a amazing poem for love and hope.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Clive Deane]

its beautiful... That beast inside of us we all need tamed...more often that not its another who can do that.