Dust

Love can suck your soul dry

like a vampire

leaving just 

an empty carcase,

a locus skin.

empty..

fragile..

delicate..

knowing someday,

someone

or 

something

will 

crush

 you

into dust

and you 

will disappear

 in the wind

and be forgotten

forever .

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- wow... this is so poignant that it stabs... brilliant stuff...

[~]

as long as we forget too.. i think the most painful thing to do, is live with memories we wish to forget..

[terry smith]

Yeah I just bought a mental eraser...the pencil is HUGE!!! ha ha.

[~]

guess you did not think to contact MIB????

[terry smith]

No I saw them in the unemployment line,after I lost that bullfrog gig. LOL :D

[~]

i will for sure have the best abs after laughing this much. good that summer lasts long in san diego :D

[terry smith]

I am a mental personal trainer!! I will send you a bill. jk.:D

[Kelly Scheppers]

I fear that the most, I think...to be forgotten, forever.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Dark poetry truly conveying the depth of the pain experienced in relationships....intriguing ending!

[AE]

Talk about depressing, Mr. Smith, but at the same time a type of bitter beauty lies just beyond the surface of all your poems. I have a question though, why is the poem organised like this exactly?

[terry smith]

to try and get the reader to focus on every word and feeling, and not just gloss it over.Thanks for reading.