pain

 

Pain is good

Pain makes you strong

At least thats what they said ,

but they were wrong

 

Pain is bad

Pain makes you want to cry.

would someone strong cry?

at least thats what i said

 

so who's wrong?

in a perfect world

no one would be wrong

but in our world something contradicted means someone's wrong

 

In a perfect world everyone would belong

but i don't

i'm a freak

I'ma geek

 

But no one can prove me wrong

I've seen too much

I know true pain

and pain is bad , it dosen't make you strong

 

it is just something terribly,terribly wrong

life ends in death

Death causes pain

and pain is just a feeling

 

a feeling that is terribly terribly wrong

in this world unfortuantely

in this world

pain belongs

Reviews

[CrimsonBlaze]

wHaT iS Up wItH tHe pAiN sIs, If yOu aRe ThAt SaD wE cAn hAnG ToGeThERAIVBOGBVO
Okay gog, now that I got Gamzee offa my review, I just wanted to say this was beautiful and oh so true. Nice one, but I don't know if it's only in my head, but it seems to me that this can fit in as lyrics...maybe a tune or something, but anyway this was perfect.

[Kit]

love to put this as my yearbook quote , but it's not short enough for a yearbook
:(

[Owlgirl]

Great poem, I love this poem, it's very well written! Amazing word choices, though you may want to work on a couple grammer and puntuation issues, but other than that it's simply amazing! Wonderful!