Hope.

Hope.

A Poem by Sultana_hiba

I hope that we will meet someday!
And hope that you will remember me.
For all the good reasons,
And not the bitter memories.

'Cause I carry your memory in my heart,
Like a dove in a battlefield.
All your songs and melodies,
Your scent that lasts for centuries.

I hope that we will meet someday,
And hope that you won't part with me.

© 2017 Sultana_hiba



Author's Note

Sultana_hiba
Quick question: should I say "part with me" or "part from me".

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I love poetry for the freedom of language. "From" would be proper given your apparent meaning, but it's your poem.

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Sultana_hiba

Karachi, Pakistan



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