"velhice"

"velhice"

A Poem by Tiago Fonseca
"

the old old man remembers her, has the one that was one with him..

"

Life goes on

On the tracks it belongs

The pain goes away

Let just set it straight..

 

Oh.. who am i!?..

 

The driveway is full of cars

The house, empty rooms

I sat to look the stars

And realize I’m doomed

 

Oh.. I miss you..

I wish you could come soon..

 

Because

 

I’m so lonely without you

I miss your cold feet tonight

I get sad around noon

Oh I wish I got it right.. the first time..

 

She’s going down the stairs

Lights she’s turning off

I’m peeling like in layers

Turning to a stall

 

I swear I just saw you now..

 

Days come and go

Nothing new on TV

Some friends came to say hello

But I wish you I could see

 

Oh.. I miss you

Oh.. I wish you were the moon

 

I would see you through the night

Make me company, stay by my side

Tell me all your stories

Tell me all your life

You would let me all mesmerized

 

 

I’m so lonely without you now

I miss your perfume tonight

I really do get sad around noon

Oh I wish I got it right..

The first time..

 

 

Copyright 2010 Tiago Fonseca 

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© 2010 Tiago Fonseca



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thanks..

i steel need to work on the song..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tiago this is lovely..bittersweet. I feel the lull of emptiness that comes from your ache..your longing. I can so relate to this song. It is essentially a part of me..it might have been a dream for you but a reality for me. I accept my fate however. It comes with lament moments..and truly looking inside yourself and recognizing who you are and what you mean to those you hold so dear. You know your words are like venom..they seep into my veins..flow through my body..effecting my whole being. You move me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


i dreamed with this once..



Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tiago Fonseca
Tiago Fonseca

Atlanta, GA



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A Poem by Tiago Fonseca