The Great Race

I don't know my name,

I can't see my face,

I don't know my place,

In this great,

race.

I can't find myself,

I can't get your help,

I can't hold my grace,

I just run, in the race.

And I don't know my name,

And I can't figure out the rules of this game,

and i cant find my place,

In this great,

race.

But one day I'll find out,

What this race is really about,

and I'll find out my name,

find a way around the rules of the game,

and I'll stray away,

from

this great 

race.

Reviews

[Zaliodir]

I like the idea that life is a race we are all running, and we don't neccessarily know the rules. I also love the idea of escaping once we figure out what the rules are. Lovely poem, thank you!

[Tamika]

This is so unique and really a pleasure to read! I love it, and the story it tells. Well done.

[William Liston]

This is a very inspirational poem. It is simple yet beautiful. Nice work.

-William Liston