Carelessly Addicted

I fall too easily for the newly fallen

The fallen that had fell the same way I have

Drifting through the streets of life,

lost without any hope of finding their way home.

I can relate to you, my dear

I can see how life must be uneasy

Hard is nothing that can become easier

But, easy can become harder

We were all happy at one time

That is why we have fallen,

dropped down to the darkest depths

waiting for our light to shine

I can't say when the light will shine upon us,

I can only say that it will.

These ciggarettes  and alcohol won't save us for long

so let's try to see what the new day brings

I can't promise that I won't fall back down, leaving you alone

But I can promise that you will continue if I do

Self reliance is the only thing you need right now, it is crucial

So my final advice to you, my friend, is...

Don't fall too easily for the newly fallen

Reviews

[Winslow Des Totes]

I like way it ties together at the end.
I also really liked the lines;
"I can't say when the light will shine upon us,
I can only say that it will.
These ciggarettes and alcohol won't save us for long
so let's try to see what the new day brings"

Great stuff. :)

[FocusedAmnesia]

"Hard is nothing that can become easier
But, easy can become harder"
I absolutely love those two lines. This piece is so... true.

"These cigarettes and alcohol won't save us for long
so let's try to see what the new day brings"
These two lines are also amazing. Overall, great read.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Love it!