For So Long

For So Long

A Poem by Jennifer

I never wanted you to leave me

I love you no matter what you put me through

But thing's weren't going great and I started to see

That this wasn't easy, but I tried so hard

To keep us going strong!

 

And for so long I was trying to make our love last

And for so long I was slowly breaking apart

But you didn't see that I was in need

And soon enough we were far apart

 

We used to meet in the garden every single night

It used to be so hard for us to walk away

I remember the way you used

To hold me in the old days

But it's to late to get back to our happy ways

 

And baby I know we thought we were

Gonna last forever

But honey we both knew that

We're not meant to be together

So now it's time to just let go

And time for us to move on

© 2010 Jennifer


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Jennifer
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So much pain in this piece. I bet this was hard to write. Sometimes letting go is the best and most painful thing we ever have to do. It leaves a hole inside you that seems like it can never be filled. This was a great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


WOW! Amazing! It's not easy to let that someone that we love go. Yes, we care for that person. No matter what they put us through, we will always love them the same and our feelings will never change. There is a part of us that tells us to not let everyting die, because if it dies, then we lose that person dear to us. We would be even more hurt and heartbroken and hurt if that happend. Because if they are still there and you see them, then it makes you feel better. In a way...maybe not the best, but in seeing them, you start to think on how to fix everything that had hhappened between you two.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so so sad- you use wonderful ways to tell your story. Brilliant.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 29, 2010
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Jennifer

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hello...im jennifer i am sad right now but i can try to be better ~i miss you~ more..

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