Soft Moments

Soft Moments

 

cloak me within

your soft moments,

 

rip apart those

aches and shames...

 

please, can't I reside

herein your forever

 

7-2-08

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

This is a most sensual request of the soul,
to be seen and loved, like a lithograth on a stone,
the two hearts forever engraved.

I like the quote you have after your name, sir.
It connects with the poem itself.
I would love to be able to write poetry like this.
Just remember words for the feelings.
And let go of the shards of the broken glass, once broken, but never, pieces together
two peaces together.

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Cloak me within your soft moments comforting me with your embrace, very nice.Shelly

[Pj]

So soulful..."please, can't I reside herein your forever"...wonderful lines!
To want to lose yourself in what they are...to be part of them always...I got an image of two people making love lol....don't know if that was your intention, but I saw it and it made the poem even more deep.

Great write, mate :D

[Jenny Davis]

Gorgeous, James! Wow, I love how you say so much in so few lines :)

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

This poem has such a serene affect, soft and full of passion as most of your work is.