My Fate is Fuzz

My Fate is Fuzz

A Poem by KeelyJane

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Take my dreams if you want to

they will meet their demands

lint finds life in pocket

though it had other plans

roll me up and throw away

all I ever was

and I’ll become something more

like my kind always does

take away the stitch of string

through the hole no longer mended

falls fate to its beginning

where circumstance has ended

Thought to be one thing

my fate is like fuzz

it is what it is

not what it once was


© 2013 KeelyJane



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"my fate is like fuzz
it is what it is
not what it once was"
I agree with the logic of the above words. I believe fate is our to decide. One right or wrong turn or decision can create a new direction for us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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That last line knocked it out of the park, really captures the essense of being alive and living in the moment. As well as show how unimportant things are once we are dead. Ag least what i got from it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


There's an endearing musicality in the last four lines. Lovely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Makes me contemplate what's with belly button lint?

anyway, love the last lines:
fate is like fuzz
it is what it is
not what it once was

trace


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this ....it puts our life events and direction in a very unique perspective...... what fuzz once was part of, it is no longer as soon as it becomes fuzz......very simplistic, yet effective perspective expressed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Most excellent thoughts keeley jane change is hard but necessary

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"My fate is like fuzz', interesting analogy! Mine is like a bowling ball on glare ice. Takes some kinda wild inertia to slow it down and get some direction of purpose!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting metaphor and meandering way to describe the changes in life that we encounter that some may call fate.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my fate is like fuzz
it is what it is
not what it once was

Fuzz. the shed detritus - thinking of one's path in that manner. That is deep introspection. I feel like that sometimes too.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow what an interesting analogy you have offered to us here. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sometimes you just feel like a used dishrag, but this poem shows you are so much more. Great write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

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