My Fate is Fuzz

My Fate is Fuzz

A Poem by KeelyJane

Take my dreams if you want to

they will meet your demands

lint finds life in pocket

though it had other plans

roll me up and throw away

all I ever was

and I’ll become something more

like my kind always does

take away the stitch of string

through the hole no longer mended

falls fate to its beginning

where circumstance has ended

Thought to be one thing

my fate is like fuzz

it is what it is

not what it once was

© 2019 KeelyJane


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"my fate is like fuzz
it is what it is
not what it once was"
I agree with the logic of the above words. I believe fate is our to decide. One right or wrong turn or decision can create a new direction for us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"Where circumstance has ended"

Now there is a quote that breaks waves.













nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww look at the bowl full of dustbunnies...awww

Love the metaphor KeelyJane and the survivor within...
X

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it is what it is
not what it once was...

There is cynicism in the tone of this piece, but a strong statement nonetheless - You may toss me aside, I may have seemed useless or small in the past - but I can, and will, be more... Good thoughts to ponder, Keely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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