Thought Process

Thought Process

A Poem by KeelyJane

Emotional tantrums
This tempest heart
Abysmal in feeling
Inspirations counterpart
My thoughts abound
Temporarily abstract
Awaiting expression
Matter meet fact

© 2014 KeelyJane



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there is great creativity in this compact little poem. love it!

Posted 1 Week Ago


matter meets fact,this tells the whole story..great line

Posted 1 Year Ago


As a matter of fact, this little gem is quite enlightening. I like it, I like it a lot.

All Good Things,

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Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew Nelson Stewart Andrew Nelson Stewart
In poetry and to find answers of who we are while walking the ephemeral road upon cracks of pain signs leading you.
The first mistake
A band of soldiers finds diplomacy in the dreg forest comes with consequences.
This is a short, sweet meet and greet! Kind of like a Rhonda Rousey fight. Matter meet fact for sure. I liked this little number of yours. KeelyJane has it going on!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Compact work here. I enjoyed it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Emotional tantrums
This tempest heart
Abysmal in feeling
Inspirations counterpart

Impressive poetry here.

Posted 3 Years Ago


WOW explicitly directed. and I love the last line

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is so beautifuly done. Brief and effective

Posted 3 Years Ago


Much feeling expressed throughout. Simple words with deep meaning. I like this on many levels.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wonderful that I'am finally being able to read requests on WC after time away. And great that this was the 1st one as a matter of fact. Wonderful!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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