hate, war

Cinquain

 hate war 

 plague our country 

 like a savage dragon

 always takes family away 

then leaves

Author's Note

Wrote this for a guy I used to know, he lived across the street from my old house, was shipped out and well .... bye bye :(

Reviews

[Melody]

I'm not very fond of cinquains, most of the time, but I'm fond of this one. Good job. :)

[Becky]

This is short and to the point. Wonderful piece.

[Mazie Tackett]

Read it all Hey I happen to like dragons thank you very much have you not ever seen how to train your dragon see it not always the dragons faults and the eragon series I'd flipping awesome saphirea may be a little crazy but she is a good girl.............sometimes dragons are not always savage your being a stereotype and I am highly offended this is the kind of thing that really gets me going because you don't know what dragon are like so don't judge them how would you feel if all people knew about you was stuff the had read and start assuming u were evil and savage huh? Huh? Huh? You don't know do you?............................................................................................................lol jk I like it you actually really good I never would have guessed keep it up and you will be the best you might even put me to shame ill have to quit writing ill be soooo ashamed OH GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! Lol keep up the good work