A walk in rain...

Walking in the rain
A pleasure of pain...
Heart held in vain
Crying in the rain…

Author's Note

:) :)

Reviews

[MIA ST. PAUL]

That's amazing! such a short poem yet it wields so much power and emotion. Your are a wonderful writer!

Very nice Job

Mia :)

[deeps]

Wow! So much said in this write here.
Quite powerful I must say.
I like this I can feel the pain.

[Kelley]

I liked this! It was short and sweet,
But said so much.

Great write thanks for sharing.
Kelley