*I'll leave*

*I'll leave*

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

I feel like a LOSER..
Every time you WALK over...
It takes my HEART away..
To know I was so LAME...

TEARS roll down my cheek..
As I walk over the STREET...
It's so hard to be SOMEONE..
YOU never wanted to be...

I am so SURPRISED..
To see nothing is ALRIGHT...
If I can fix it all which went WRONG..
Believe me I would have PLEAD...
Even if that means I have to LEAVE...




© 2010 Vaishali..^_^



Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
just a random poem..:) ^_^

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A very good random poem. I like how you strengthen certain words with color. A very good flow of words in this poem. Sometime we can't be what someone want us to be. If someone want you to be different. Why did they want to be with you at the beginning? A strong ending to the poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.



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That was very sad :( I could feel your anger in your words!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I find random poems are usually best :) They tend to be just random emotions you have in you somewhere...or at least they are for me... lol Anyway! It was awesome :) I loved the word choice and the meaning of the poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An interesting poem. The changing of colors to distinguish the words is really nice. A pleasant read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is interesting. Great poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

short and sweet and like the 2nd stanza... this is very nice,, n i think it may be some more better,,,, but overall this is very good..

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is so nice
i loved that :))


Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

random but nice:)
short,sweet poem..nice try
leaving is never easy..but sometimes
we have no choice..

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very sad but who ever heard of a happy poet right. I did like
what you had to say. Sometimes people never catch the hint do they.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

walking away from your problems will never solve them,only delay the inevitable.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A very good random poem. I like how you strengthen certain words with color. A very good flow of words in this poem. Sometime we can't be what someone want us to be. If someone want you to be different. Why did they want to be with you at the beginning? A strong ending to the poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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