Secrets...

I'm a pretty girl full of dark secrets,

would I trust you enough to tell them to you,

would you stay long enough to listen,

would you still love me with all I've done

Would you still kiss my lips,

which are full of untold secrets and broken lies,

will you still embrace me, with a body full of secret harm,

Will you still caress my body which speak all my dark secrets...

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Would you come to bear heart, when truth relies on fiction
Will you carry the weight of this heavy heart
But most of all, will you continue a road, when a new one is before you
Will it be I?

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I like JTB's comment. This poem well written and full of real life! Tyfs!!!

[Beccy]

Sometimes it's best to keep those 'dark secrets' to ourselves.
Enjoyed the unfolding, the questioning in this poem.

Beccy.

[John the Baptist]

A lot of steamy imagery in this one. I cannot tell whether it's a feeling out or a come on. Either is possible. An enticing piece of work here.