Burning Desires

Burning Desires

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
"

Lovers in flames.

"
                                                              Burning Desires
                                            A collaboration with Jonathan Edward Furches

We, don’t have to worry about nothing,
The fire rages in my eyes that you see,
You lift my spirits like a chaotic breeze,
We burn ,burn ,burn,
Setting free to the clouds in the wind,
Wrapping me up in this giddy spin.

Rising from the ashes,
Both of us together like a phoenix,
I know that feeling burning in your eyes,
I know you're the truth inside of the lies.
Fingers entwined ablaze with emotion,
We burn,burn,burn.  

We cant let go ,
Setting up like fire a smoke never cold,
Hand in hand is what we see ,
Burning in flesh with remedy.

You inflame me and course through my veins,
Your loving is the sweetest pain,
You take the lead and then its my turn ,
You make me smolder I embrace the burn.

But we, we don't have to worry about nothing ,
because we have one hell of a something,
They, they will see the fire in our eyes,
Because it's what sets us free.


© 2014 Vidya Bacchus



Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
Another collaboration with my friend Jon who's trying to help me get rid of the cobwebs.

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This is really good. Like really. The figures of speech used amaze me. I really like it. It's like a professional piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

You little lady are the best.Thank you Simmy :)
Not sure I like the double negative of "We don't have to worry about nothing" but the rest of the collaboration is well written. Playful and sexy seduction in every line. The two of you blend ink well. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


FEA

3 Years Ago

I reakon Vidya
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Well good.Morning :)
FEA

3 Years Ago

Morning Vidya
Fiery, sassy, gorgeous write. It is just good strong writing. Well penned and well said.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you Jetta :)
Batman and Robin strike again!! the whole thing is damn good but this is my favourite
"you take the lead and then it's my turn
you make me smoulder, I embrace the burn"

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol...of course you love those lines my sweet friend.Thank you Sir Woody your words always mean a lo.. read more
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ron
Wow. Full of burning passion...sighs.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you Red :)
ron

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
You lift my spirits like a chaotic breeze,
We burn ,burn ,burn,
The images you have created are steamy, soft and sensual...filled with passion. A beautiful collaboration by two outstanding poets.

:) Julie

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Jules.Jon is very easy to work with :)
I'm not quite sure how a chaotic disease lifts your spirits but I got the BURN part. ;) Lots of hot stuff and feisty fiery feelings going down here, you guys should have a fire extinguisher on hand. Nice collaboration again you two!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

I am sorry chica but 3 is my limit 4 if I drink a mad bull lol
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

HA...I have three, the rest are borrowed only during the week thank gawd lol
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Ha yes I also have 3 that seem to be high most of the time.I wonder where they get all this energy m.. read more
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FEA
Smiles another fine poem cobwebs gone now:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

I hope so but its too soon to tell.Thank you Jon :)
FEA

3 Years Ago

Smilessssssssss in the milesssssssssssss welcome :)
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Miles of smiles :)

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Vidya Bacchus
Vidya Bacchus

point fortin, Trinidad and Tobago



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