A Jar of Ants

A Jar of Ants

A Poem by Lobster Goldberg
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A prank gone bad

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I'm holding a jar of ants
Why do this you say?
Im waiting here for my friend
It's a little game we play
Pranks we pull every day
And now it is my turn
When I put them in his pants
It will really burn.
Here he comes down the path
Time to rake him over coals
What the heck!
They're on me now!
Guess I should have thought about the holes.

© 2013 Lobster Goldberg



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Needs an illustration...with the narrative...yet the humor is...a catch phrase towards the end...so we do not see the wholes for all their worth during the beginning of the verse...so that is why I said an illustration of this in front of an audience would work better with this style of a commentary...so to speak...makes for good laughter and visual representation...

Posted 3 Years Ago


haha, this is so funny. Really made me laugh. Harm set, harm get, I'd say ;)
Great one :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lobster Goldberg

3 Years Ago

Good saying! Mind if I borrow it? :) Thanks for reading :)
annabellee

3 Years Ago

no not at all, you're most welcome :)
Omg , this is playful and awesomely FUNNY !


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lobster Goldberg

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Leo
This is great. I really like the way you can visualize the whole scene taking place in the fewest of words.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lobster Goldberg

3 Years Ago

Thanks Bonnie! Yes short and sweet is the way to go sometimes. :)
Actually, this WAS funny!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lobster Goldberg

3 Years Ago

Haha! Thank you! Wasn't sure if only I thought it was funny :)

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Added on October 23, 2013
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