Subtle signs

Subtle signs silently flash in my mind

Avatars bow in the heads of mankind

Vicious thoughts hinder warm gentle hands

Eavesdrop on god’s right hand man

Mine is to give, mine is to die

Echoing on the tides of time 

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

This one definitely contains some hidden depths.. still trying to ascertain its significance.. I do enjoy the short, succinct cadence of flow as well as the alliteration. I'm still thinking on its thought-provoking statements..

[vigilantebastard]

i wrote this quite a while ago, i cant even remember what i was feeling at the time now... I think i was quite depressed expressing thoughts at the time whilst chucking in the (maybe not so subtle) SAVEME.. Thanks for your review, it is much appreciated.