A Poem by vinny ciambriello

Your apartment house neighbors and the warmth there generated


The building is cold
 Not much heat
No one talks to you
Little noises
Doors closing
That's about it
Not much sign of anything
They shop
They carry stuff in
They must do something
With it
All these little worlds
I'll never know
Mostly, I don't care
But I wonder
Why I get this feeling
Something's going to happen soon
We'll all be out our doors
Like friends
Like we always were
The question is:
Who is going to take a dive
Off the roof
To make that happen?

© 2011 vinny ciambriello

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This is really interesting. It reminds me of the town I live in. I like your writing style. It never fails to paint a picture in my mind. Good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like the flow and the somethings-going-to-happen-soon vibe this has. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I liked the flow from beginning to end. it has a tangible yearning in it that helps the flow continue. A good piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like this. I like the simple flow and thought going on.
Good piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on January 17, 2011
Last Updated on June 1, 2011


vinny ciambriello
vinny ciambriello

Brooklyn, NY

I'm moody. When I'm onto a good thing with a story, my mood lifts and I'm having fun. it takes several sit-downs to finish a story. About me, I'm a Brooklyn, NY guy. I have the attitude of the .. more..