Open love

Open love

A Poem by vivian

My walls have been cut they have been damaged

And you still hold me up

I'm such a mess and you still hold me

You don’t listen to all those girls that said i’m crazy

When I told you to leave me you just kissed me

your open love holds me together


© 2017 vivian


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very poignant I think of a woman's perspective of how deep love serves her

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice one. I really liked it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 19, 2017
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vivian
vivian

oskhosh, WI



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