THE NIGHTMARE

keep me away from the nightmare please.

I FEEL FRIGHT AND SHIVER..

I SEE EVERYTHING FADING THAT WAS TO ME SO DEAR.,

MY EYES ARE ALL WET,AND I SCREAM LOUD.

BUT,THERE IS NO SKY,NO EARTH THAT CAN HEAR.

I SAW IT FOR THE FIRST TIME,THE FIRST TIME I FELT WEAK.

THE NIGHTMARE.!

HAS IT BEEN KILLING ME?

I CAN'T UTTER..MY LIPS ARE PALE..

THE NIGHTMARE TOOK MY SOUL AWAY..

AFTER YOU ARE GONE..

I SEE NO WAY..

I FEEL STRESSED..I WISH EVERYTHING IS BEAUTIFUL AGAIN.

BUT,THE NIGHTMARE THAT HAS BECOME TRUE,SCARES ME..

IT SAYS NOTHING CAN BE GOOD AND FINE AGAIN.

DEEP INSIDE AM SEARCHING BROKEN PIECES OF MINE..

BUT I JUST CAN'T FIND..

THE NIGHTMARE HAS TAKEN MY SOUL AWAY..

THE NIGHTMARE!!!

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

One really captivating work of yours.
Nighmares are almost frightening and make you feel uncomfortable. I just manage reciting up duas before going to sleep.
Well, some grammatical errors need to be corrected.
" feel frightened and shivery"
" everything be beautiful again"
Well done! Good luck!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much for correcting me where i was wrong..and thank you for liking my work

[Tazeen Ahmed]

No one's perfect.
No problem Wajiha.
(hugs)

[APOORVA]

very well written.
keep up the good work

[Najam Us Saher]

That one dream that you call it your best dream can also turn to your worst nightmare. Years ago I wrote this quote now I feel for this poem ☺ Very well written. I liked it. (I would like to tell you to please off the caps lock while you type the poem. It disturbs the reading. I hope you don't mind me telling you)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

please.i dont mind.its good that you are correcting me.i am just a budding writer so i have to learn alot.anytime i am wrong at my write ups please do correct me

[Najam Us Saher]

If I find any mistakes I will surely tell you. ☺