My long lost poem.

My long lost poem.

A Poem by WhoaitSarah
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I was hurt.

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Thanks for being such a jerk
and pretending that  you cared

Thanks for all the lies and feelings that you said we shared

I feel head over heals for you did you not feel that same?
I gave you my heart and you broke it but am I the one to blaim?

© 2008 WhoaitSarah


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I feel this too, i really like this poem.

Never knowing if you were the one to blame is always endless nightmares during the day.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple. To the point. I love it. It's amazing how we can fall for someone, thinking have done the same, but in reality they haven't. Very nicely done. Look forward to reading more!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

direct from a young girls heart.

clear and simple...

Thanks.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and very descriptive.
since i have been in a similar situation, i think i can imagine what you are trying to express.

thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this one. Short but super deeply full of emotion.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a horrible feeling to know with certainty that the other is the cause of the problems, and still feel like all of it is your fault. This is a wonderful late night rant. Writing with true emotions can make even the shortest poem one of the most beautiful things in the world.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 8, 2008
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WhoaitSarah
WhoaitSarah

Oklahoma city, OK



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Hi, i'm Sarah. And I'm just your average teenage girl. If you want to know about me, ask. (: more..

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