Stay

Just a little something I found from an old notebook, from back when I was 13.

The key is loneliness, be weak and despair.

It's always good to have virtues.

I'm weird but never stare.

A dreamer off the curfew,

A dreamer all alone.

Working hard is effort

Though not of the unknown.

Stay near me forever,

Stay near me for life.

Stay near me forever

They whisper among the night.

Reviews

[Unforgiven Guy]

When I was 13, I wrote a story about aliens invading Earth, and a teenage boy and girl who manage to have sex whilst on the run from the aliens through the woods of Sumatra. (No, I'm not kidding, unfortunately). So I dare say you were doing better at that age with your writing than I was.

[Heather]

That doesn't sound so bad, it sounds interesting! aha. Meh, it's not as cringe worthy as I thought it'd be aha. :)

[genocide]

very good poem my dear very well written

[Heather]

Thank you :)

[genocide]

oh yeah can you please give me some reviews on my provile