Drugs

Drugs

A Poem by irrelevant
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life

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i am overwhelmed
by the beauty of the world
the development of humanity
i may be losing my sanity
i guess its worth it
for these drugs
for
they mask my sadness
and make me happy
for a brief time that is a trip
i'll be relieved a few days of hell


© 2014 irrelevant


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irrelevant
dont hate, appreciate

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The concept of this poem saddened me, but mainly I guess because I am a very different sort of person than the voice speaking here. I choose to see beauty around me and be happy without any form of enhancement, just myself, my emotions and my eyes. I know not everyone is able to do that however and must find other ways to experience peace, happiness, and mask pain. I only wish there was more help available to these individuals.
Well written, smooth flow, capturing a lot with few words. Thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

irrelevant

10 Years Ago

thank you. this is written very much from how i feel right now and i am very glad you appreciate thi.. read more



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Yes, opposites make us rebound to the other side. You may keep this tiny gift poem as your own:

Bounce

Spending too much time in hell
makes us lose our sanity
where we bounce out of our cell
to embrace humanity.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yes, opposites make us rebound to the other side. You may keep this tiny gift poem as your own:

Bounce

Spending too much time in hell
makes us lose our sanity
where we bounce out from our cell
to embrace humanity.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"for
they mask my sadness
and make me happy
for a brief time that is a trip"

You have described the effects of drugs marvelously. Thank you for penning...:)..........


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

irrelevant

10 Years Ago

thank you for reading it
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..........................
The concept of this poem saddened me, but mainly I guess because I am a very different sort of person than the voice speaking here. I choose to see beauty around me and be happy without any form of enhancement, just myself, my emotions and my eyes. I know not everyone is able to do that however and must find other ways to experience peace, happiness, and mask pain. I only wish there was more help available to these individuals.
Well written, smooth flow, capturing a lot with few words. Thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

irrelevant

10 Years Ago

thank you. this is written very much from how i feel right now and i am very glad you appreciate thi.. read more

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Added on March 24, 2014
Last Updated on March 24, 2014
Tags: drugs, nature, life, sadness, happy

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