Drugs

Drugs

A Poem by irrelevant
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life

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i am overwhelmed
by the beauty of the world
the development of humanity
i may be losing my sanity
i guess its worth it
for these drugs
for
they mask my sadness
and make me happy
for a brief time that is a trip
i'll be relieved a few days of hell



© 2014 irrelevant



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irrelevant
dont hate, appreciate

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The concept of this poem saddened me, but mainly I guess because I am a very different sort of person than the voice speaking here. I choose to see beauty around me and be happy without any form of enhancement, just myself, my emotions and my eyes. I know not everyone is able to do that however and must find other ways to experience peace, happiness, and mask pain. I only wish there was more help available to these individuals.
Well written, smooth flow, capturing a lot with few words. Thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

irrelevant

3 Years Ago

thank you. this is written very much from how i feel right now and i am very glad you appreciate thi.. read more



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Yes, opposites make us rebound to the other side. You may keep this tiny gift poem as your own:

Bounce

Spending too much time in hell
makes us lose our sanity
where we bounce out of our cell
to embrace humanity.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Yes, opposites make us rebound to the other side. You may keep this tiny gift poem as your own:

Bounce

Spending too much time in hell
makes us lose our sanity
where we bounce out from our cell
to embrace humanity.

Posted 3 Years Ago


"for
they mask my sadness
and make me happy
for a brief time that is a trip"

You have described the effects of drugs marvelously. Thank you for penning...:)..........


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

irrelevant

3 Years Ago

thank you for reading it
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..........................
The concept of this poem saddened me, but mainly I guess because I am a very different sort of person than the voice speaking here. I choose to see beauty around me and be happy without any form of enhancement, just myself, my emotions and my eyes. I know not everyone is able to do that however and must find other ways to experience peace, happiness, and mask pain. I only wish there was more help available to these individuals.
Well written, smooth flow, capturing a lot with few words. Thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

irrelevant

3 Years Ago

thank you. this is written very much from how i feel right now and i am very glad you appreciate thi.. read more

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Added on March 24, 2014
Last Updated on March 24, 2014
Tags: drugs, nature, life, sadness, happy

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