Can it ever Be

written along time ago

This love we shared can it ever be

We both desire true love, passion, something to hold on to

But the sad part is that it'll never be

Because im here and ur there

i understand how it must be

We both will never forget and always cherish what we had

so my questions are answered but what do i do

Should i fight for what i love or let i be

Reviews

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

I like this poem...such strong emotions in just a few lines...

[Sophie]

Long distance relationships are definitely sad and tough.
You've captured so many emotions in this poem.
Great job; I liked it.

PS: I think you should fight! :)

[Sel Whiteley]

Long distance love, its divide of time and space, you capture it all really well in that

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

u havnt faught for love b4
but good poem n im guessin its bout tab

[Akina]

OMG, you got to fight!
if your love her that much then you must go to her!
great written :)

//Akina