Drown in Tears

Darkness capes around her black heart

Crimson tears fall from her blue eyes

Shes all alone

Her body failing her

She wants to cry out to her love

No one is there though

Shes lost and alone

Shes losing her sanity slowely

Her bloodstained flesh turns black

Slowely burning in her own hell called home

No one sees her pain though

Shes alone

She stares at the black walls surrounding her

She cant even feel any pain any more

Shes turning to stone

Lifeless

No one will save her...

Shes not worth their time

A girl with a black heart

Hatred is her only emotion

Shes drowing in her own tears

She can't find the top of the water

She closes her eyes

And lets go...

Author's Note

okay the punctuation on this sucks lolz i didnt have enough time to do that =/

Reviews

[chloe cruz]

I really liked this; especially the ending. The entire poem flowed really well, but the ending just... captured all the emotion... That doesn't make sense, but I don't know how else to put it, haha. Again, it's a great write.

"Shes drowing in her own tears

She can't find the top of the water

She closes her eyes

And lets go..."

Loved it!

Chloe.