synthetic

synthetic

A Poem by Wondering Mind

synthetic


not artificial

was your love

to me


was; as 'is' in the past


tense though it was

it is now past-tense

and no art in its artifacts


synthetic



© 2016 Wondering Mind



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They say that sometimes synthetic can be better than the real thing. Only time can tell but by then it's too late. In the case of love, though, only the real thing will stand the test of time. Great thought provoking observation. Very clever. Love the middle - really drives it home. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Interesting use of the word "synthetic". Love if artificial can not be counted as love. Nicely penned ☺

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Wondering Mind

1 Year Ago

Thank you YumnaKay- I appreciate your time.
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. The pleasure was mine ☺

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