Stardust Sickness

Stardust Sickness

A Poem by WordShaker33

2 a.m. I'm still awake

Every time I think my mind goes blank

It seems I was out for longer than expected

Now my head is filled with Stardust it collected

I suppose it's my own stupid fault

For dropping my things and coming to a hault

Then looking up at the sky up above

Now I can't stop I think I'm falling in love

But a girl like me? I have no business

Being caught in this stardust sickness.

© 2015 WordShaker33



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Gee
Enjoyed this....ever tried counting sheep???

Posted 2 Years Ago


WordShaker33

2 Years Ago

I prefer to count the stars. Hahaha.
Gee

2 Years Ago

Much prettier,but saying that I have seen attractive sheep!!!!
I find it funny that I'm reading this at 2am. Loved the ending and the rhymes embedded into it. I found it to be quite relatable too :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


WordShaker33

2 Years Ago

Hahaha that is funny. I'm often up until at least 3 a.m. Because I am too busy stargazing, thinking,.. read more
2am i'm still awake... lol.. I can so relate to that...and everything being my own stupid fault too... :D
Great poem! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


WordShaker33

2 Years Ago

Hahaha, I'm sure most writers could relate:) But I was up until 2a.m. today and this thought of a po.. read more
You make me chuckle!

A very refreshing poetry you're bled within. The words you've cracked on the page seem to be directly and perfectly belonged to your spirit. I guess, sometimes.. staying up late nights's all what makes heart more deeper & deeper for.. in... words. Your emotions're being there... in this piece! Great work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


WordShaker33

2 Years Ago

Thank you I'm glad you thought the poem was entertaining. Often times I'm not able to sleep because .. read more
Adams

2 Years Ago

So means, you dealing with insomnia. Well, that's pretty good. Get yourself some coffee & a great pa.. read more
WordShaker33

2 Years Ago

Thanks ill be sure to follow your advice. Thanks for the review. :)

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WordShaker33

Lakeside, AZ



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