Goodbye Cruel World

Goodbye cruel world

I just can't be any good to myself

the pain will be over

There is nothing to keep me here anymore

 

Goodbye cruel world

I just couldn't hide the loneliness

I'm sufering, it's killing me

There is no one to stop me now

 

A last song as I step out of the light

a last wish I whisper as a last goodbye

to the world that made me bleed and cry

goodbye cruel world, as the lights go out...

Reviews

[Morgan]

I love this poem. I love everything about it. The wording, form, and etc. Keep up the good work.

[Jake Donald Stephens]

"The pain will be over". So true.
Love this poem.