When We Were Together

When We Were Together

A Poem by Xicor

No one knows what will happen tomorrow, 

It’s something that no one can predict

Thought that I lost you forever, 

You came back again astonishingly to contradict

 

I can’t believe my eyes, 

You were standing right in front of me

All the memories flashed back, 

When you had my sweet little heart’s key

 

Can’t remember our last talk, 

It’s like almost a year gone

Can’t remember our last walk, 

The bond we shared was too strong

 

Looks like something is there, 

Something that want us to be together

That’s why I guess, 

You came back and this time forever

 

We talked… We danced… We did everything that we missed...

Felt Like I was in Heaven… Recalled the old times… Yes we did…

 

This time I want you to be with me forever,

 I want to give you everything

But then I realized... It was just a dream… 

It was only just a dream !


© 2011 Xicor



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I really liked this, I can connect to it on a personal level. I'm a bit confused about one stanza, however:

Can’t remember our last talk,
It’s like almost a year gone
Can’t remember our last walk,
"The bond we shared was too strong"- you write that you can't remember, but if the bond was so strong...it sort of contradicts itself, unless you wrote it to mean something else.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Nice one! Liked it! specifically the idea.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this, I can connect to it on a personal level. I'm a bit confused about one stanza, however:

Can’t remember our last talk,
It’s like almost a year gone
Can’t remember our last walk,
"The bond we shared was too strong"- you write that you can't remember, but if the bond was so strong...it sort of contradicts itself, unless you wrote it to mean something else.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is so wonderful and lovely as well as a hint of sadness. So very nicely written, enjoyed this write.

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~The Silent Talker~ I am always a mess. I can never keep my own secrets. I laugh too hard at stupid things. I live in the past, in the memories. I have with the people I love. I am heartsick .. more..

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