Weary

Monotony beats my brain

With metal bats

Until it bruises

Blue and bloody.

Chop meat mind

Tenderized

Dripping and oozing

Leaking out of my ears,

Evidence of my frustrations

Leave puddles

Everywhere I go.

One day I will be bone dry.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Monotony beats the brain,
With metal bats,
Until it bruises light,
Blue and bloody.
Chop meaty mind
Tenderized sludge,
Dripping and oozing,
Leaking out of my ears,
Evidence of my frustrations,
Leave puddles oily,
Everywhere I go.

I love the "With metal bats" line, perfect.
One day I will be bone dry.

[..]

like the set up & flow,