Fear of the Unknown

Fear of the Unknown

A Poem by Gitana Deneff

Hot moist tear tracks

Scalding cheeks

Steaming in my frustration

And hate

Knowing it is far too late

To change my fate.

Am I destined to be a failure?

Destined to be great?

The fear of the unknown

Leaves me trembling...

Irate.

© 2011 Gitana Deneff


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I love your poetry style. Short and sweet! Mine are always lagging. I wish I could write poems like you do! My favorite line would be "hot moist tear tracks/scalding cheeks" I just love the imagry there! And oh my gosh, do I know how you feel in this poem!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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this style isn't something I really enjoy, however you've made a believer of me, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love your poetry style. Short and sweet! Mine are always lagging. I wish I could write poems like you do! My favorite line would be "hot moist tear tracks/scalding cheeks" I just love the imagry there! And oh my gosh, do I know how you feel in this poem!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Felt this before, that's for sure. Captivating write! Thanking for sharing this piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Burning Passion spells Greatness. The mistress of your own Destiny :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Gitana Deneff
Gitana Deneff

Cypress, CA



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I love writing. I really hope that I can make a career out of it... I tend to look everywhere for inspiration. The world is my oyster and it has treated me well, helping create my beloved compositions.. more..

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