Till Eternity

Till Eternity

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

You can see me, I can see you 
But we can't be together 
For the world is cruel and unyielding 
Don't worry,love, because 
No matter what 
I will love you until the very end 
Till eternity. 
I can see the love shining in your eyes 
Flowing strong in rough strides 
Whenever you'll look, I'll be right beside because 
No matter what 
I will love you until the very end 
Till eternity.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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i like your this word: "BESIDE". i get to read it many times, in your allot of poetry which makes me feeling like: "wow, she's such a kinky mami!" xoxo

"till eternity" is a very catchy title you chose to work on. people esp. the lovers in love oft. say, "awww.. baby, i'll love you all night even "till the end of this world, or the end of my last breath"".. so yeah, here you blend such marijuana things around very creatively. nice work, candledoll.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Lol I was talking about the "Beside"word.
Other than that it depends on the reader from which.. read more
Adams

1 Year Ago

ah.. i was right, then!! xoxo
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ohh yeahh😉


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i like your this word: "BESIDE". i get to read it many times, in your allot of poetry which makes me feeling like: "wow, she's such a kinky mami!" xoxo

"till eternity" is a very catchy title you chose to work on. people esp. the lovers in love oft. say, "awww.. baby, i'll love you all night even "till the end of this world, or the end of my last breath"".. so yeah, here you blend such marijuana things around very creatively. nice work, candledoll.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Lol I was talking about the "Beside"word.
Other than that it depends on the reader from which.. read more
Adams

1 Year Ago

ah.. i was right, then!! xoxo
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ohh yeahh😉
Peaceful smile! This is lovely sure footed but gentle. Love is love is love....it knows no boundaries and can transcended space and time. R xo

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Indeed! thank you for the excellent review. :)
Love is eternal. It can cross mountains, rivers and dimensions. Once felt, never forgotten.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes, never forgotten, although how much we often fall in love, still true love is yet to be found.
Lorry.

1 Year Ago

It is only ever found, the minute we stop looking. That is our irony.
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

yes indeed. I agree with you.
True love is never forgotten.
"I will love you until the very end
Till eternity."
The above lines. Perfect words for love we cannot have. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

thank you for liking Coyote! Indeed we can only search for love but never possess it.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are right and you are welcome.
Beautiful.. :) well expressed..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! ☺

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