A Girl Like Her

A Girl Like Her

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

A girl like her, she went 
moving away, beloved place, gone distant
I want to move far apart, she thought
and that is why, her ways were bent
along to the hidden paths
where she could see what would give her 
happiness and content
What she needed was happiness within
But never again it was felt




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Happiness, a feeling for which the whole world is constantly searching, searching in places when it doesn't live... The only process of finding happiness is to look inside of self, because outside happiness is temporary, here today gone tomorrow... Very well spoken...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! And yes you are right. That is the thing which is missing and we are so naive so as to fi.. read more



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Oh my, where could that girl have gone? It seems she is still waiting for something

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

No I think she found that something which was missing from her life :)
Happiness, a feeling for which the whole world is constantly searching, searching in places when it doesn't live... The only process of finding happiness is to look inside of self, because outside happiness is temporary, here today gone tomorrow... Very well spoken...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! And yes you are right. That is the thing which is missing and we are so naive so as to fi.. read more
Nice job. So true that we search for happiness from the outside in...never really finding it...because what we truly need to be happy, is to build it from the inside out. Physician heal thyself kind of thing, I guess. At any rate, I enjoyed this poem. Good write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the in-depth review. Indeed you are right. Thanks for visiting ☺
Touching, Piece and remarking towards a vivid imagery! Good write!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you Carl! Glad you liked it. Review appreciated ☺
Great logic in the poetry.
"What she needed was happiness within"
Most of us search for things we do not need. Simple needs are what we truly need. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That was I wanted to explain. We pursue the wrong things in our life, never looking within ourselves.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I did and you are welcome.

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