Always Remember

Always Remember

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

I cherish the moment I saw you first
When watching you made my heart burst
with passion and longing.
I wish the times could reverse
To good old days,
Where no one comes along
where you and me, become Us
The kisses, the hugs, I can never forget
They are the most beautiful thing in the universe
bestowed to me, A gift by you 
And that is all, I'll ever have from you.
Praying for you, wherever you are, Be safe,
Always remember, there is someone who cannot 
Live without you.




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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I do understand this poem. I have pray for another and I was prayed for. Love and friendship never forget.
"Praying for you, wherever you are, Be safe,
Always remember, there is someone who cannot
Live without you."
The above lines. Strong and true for many. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

they do hold true for many...
Thank you for your thoughts here, Coyote. I appreciate it :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I loved your work tonight. You are my muse for this night.



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BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL.
cheers to the way LOVE make us feel.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for this lovely review :)
I do understand this poem. I have pray for another and I was prayed for. Love and friendship never forget.
"Praying for you, wherever you are, Be safe,
Always remember, there is someone who cannot
Live without you."
The above lines. Strong and true for many. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

they do hold true for many...
Thank you for your thoughts here, Coyote. I appreciate it :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I loved your work tonight. You are my muse for this night.
This is so true, there are many who believe that no one care for them but then there is just 1

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

true.. there is just one..
Heartfelt, nostalgic and full of feeling. You did a great job on the clarity here!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Michael! This means a lot to me!☺
You speak of a metamorphosis that takes place inside. I've felt it before without being aware of it until later. It's as though a chapter of life is being written with no conclusions until we see an end. The last line says a lot.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Yes, when it hits, it hits bad.. Thank you for your thoughts here! I'm glad you like it ☺
If uniting together in love is a destination, all the expressions like we have out here in this poetry is the path. In life whatever is the destination journey has a special meaning and adds value to your achievement.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the beautiful insight! Really appreciate it ☺
That first sight, first being together, when the world fades away and nothing else matters, is a whole lot of emptiness when it is gone, yet the kindest hearts always hope they fair better than we are doing. Lovely words and sentiment.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Exactly! Thank you for the kind words Nemo ☺glad you liked it.
Lorry.

1 Year Ago

You're welcome :)
Beautifully written and expressed with the raw emotion of a love that did not go as one perhaps had planned. Love your style! ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you Miss Sharon! I am glad you liked it. I admire your style ☺
Thankyou for reviewing.. read more
It is beautiful... Loved the way how SHE expressed her feelings... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Lol thank you for the punk! Appreciated! ☺
this is so beautiful I love this. I like that you show a vulnerable side in this piece. I hope you find her someday.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shae-Leigh Johns

1 Year Ago

oh wow I am so sorry my bad I feel really bad now
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

No,No, Its okay..It Happens. I know my name doesn't reveal anything about my gender :p
Don't.. read more
Shae-Leigh Johns

1 Year Ago

ok cheers :)

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