Doubts

Doubts

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

I have been too aggressive 
Too angry for my own good 
Never believing in your truths 
Always considering them lies 
Or just bending them into what I believe is true 
You say you haven't been a good friend 
But in actual I haven't been 
At least you don't doubt me 
While me? 
I do 
Every single, ruddy moment of my life 
Spent doubting you 
Your intentions 
Your friendship 
Always believing 
That this will end 
When either you 
Or me 
Lose interest 
Maybe I'm wrong 
But then 
When have I ever been right 
Except for the moment 
When I chose 
You?



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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"Always considering them lies
Or just bending them into what I believe is true"

Doubts are rooted in us- which makes us ponder and look more into things. However we sometimes, this lust to relinquish the doubts makes us blind to things before us.
Curiosity wounds us-sometimes. That's what I believe.
Really liked your poem. Simple but meaningful. The ending was really beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Yes.. Its the doubts which does the job of separating loved ones....
I'm glad you liked it. T.. read more



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Its good to be reflective in relationships..Its bad when such activities become intrusive transforming an equal partnership lnto a dependency.
This.poem speaks with the latter voice.
A happy medium must be sought.
Good honest piece YumnaKay

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Yes I agree. This is what I'm feeling lately.. It drives one crazy.. Thank you for your kind words .. read more
A familiar feeling... Your reflections come from a sensitive heart and mind... always a little worried about our impact, and about the other's reactions..

The frustration of feeling like this is well expressed in the word 'ruddy', Don't often hear that word these days... but it says it all.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Hahahaha..
Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

Sorry Jibey. My bad.
Lol.
Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

I tried to compensate ya with a brief review

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Dr. YumnaKay
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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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My writings reflect what I am, have been, and what I seek to be. Most of it is just ramblings in prose but occasionally I'll come up with poetry (if mood be). ~ We are not the same person we were .. more..

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