Believe Me

Believe Me

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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One lousy attempt....

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The end will come
and hit us like never before
just wait and see

still

my heart will beat
whether you come or leave
why don't you believe?




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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I really do wonder, who do you write for?

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

oh well it was all experimental :P
Short and deep I like that, thanks for sharing!

~Rob~

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for liking, Rob! It means alot :)
an amazing piece
deeply influenced me
thanks for sharing !

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm glad it touched you.. ☺
We survive, with or without, yet the quality of our survival is out of our hands, up in the air, waiting for the response that can be our destiny, or our downfall...Yet it still keeps beating.
Nicely captured. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes indeed! Thank you for your insight on this piece ☺
Short and on point. Love it

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for liking and reviewing :) It means alot!
unspokenpain

11 Months Ago

Yourwelcome ^.^
Nice piece of poem. It is short yet the meaning is so deep. Keep it up!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you! Good to know you liked it ☺
Kevin Gerardo

11 Months Ago

Of course hehe
This poem is So sweet :)
I can even make it my whatsapp status..

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Lol thank you! Its not worth it btw....
Ashish

11 Months Ago

Not worthy?
Why don't you believe? Haha
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Hahah! I try 😝

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