Believe Me

Believe Me

A Chapter by Closed
"

One lousy attempt....

"
The end will come
and hit us like never before
just wait and see

still

my heart will beat
whether you come or leave
why don't you believe?




© 2017 Closed



My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

I really do wonder, who do you write for?

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

9 Months Ago

oh well it was all experimental :P
Short and deep I like that, thanks for sharing!

~Rob~

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Thank you for liking, Rob! It means alot :)
an amazing piece
deeply influenced me
thanks for sharing !

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Thank you! I'm glad it touched you.. ☺
We survive, with or without, yet the quality of our survival is out of our hands, up in the air, waiting for the response that can be our destiny, or our downfall...Yet it still keeps beating.
Nicely captured. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed! Thank you for your insight on this piece ☺
Short and on point. Love it

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Thank you for liking and reviewing :) It means alot!
unspokenpain

1 Year Ago

Yourwelcome ^.^
Nice piece of poem. It is short yet the meaning is so deep. Keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Thank you! Good to know you liked it ☺
Kevin Gerardo

1 Year Ago

Of course hehe
This poem is So sweet :)
I can even make it my whatsapp status..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Lol thank you! Its not worth it btw....
Ashish

1 Year Ago

Not worthy?
Why don't you believe? Haha
Closed

1 Year Ago

Hahah! I try 😝

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

252 Views
7 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 4, 2016
Last Updated on August 17, 2017


Author

Closed
Closed

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



About
Writer, dentist, enthusiast, eccentric and a whole lot more, hoping to discover this year. more..

Writing
Millennia Millennia

A Chapter by Closed


Doodles Doodles

A Chapter by Closed



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..