Emotions

Emotions

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

Emotions
such a useless thing to have
and those who have them
makes them useless too
wouldn't it be nice to get along with life
just the way it is going
with nothing there to bother or
affect us?

Love 
such a waste of time
and those who do
wastes them too
wouldn't it be cool to walk on straight
without giving a s**t to 
all this mess?

Sex
such an overrated thing to do
and those who have it
makes them high on their sex drive
wouldn't it be rad to keep calm
and wait for the right moment to come
to feel all the feelings for what they really are...




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Its a beautiful writing and I understand the frustration in every bit of this. Though I agree with one of the other reviews on the negativity part initially...the last two lines gave a wholesome picture of the emotion which gave the message to not run after things and hurt oneself. Written beautifully in simple language.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you understood the underlying message here.. Thank you for liking and re.. read more



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That's a very strong opinion. Perhaps because it hasn't come in a good way

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Ahh well.. This was a long time ago. I think differently now 😉😊
It's a real fact of creativity about life. It is credible and a good write up.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much ☺
Its a beautiful writing and I understand the frustration in every bit of this. Though I agree with one of the other reviews on the negativity part initially...the last two lines gave a wholesome picture of the emotion which gave the message to not run after things and hurt oneself. Written beautifully in simple language.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you understood the underlying message here.. Thank you for liking and re.. read more
I really like this poem in a weird way cause its really dark and negative. This is a one sided view of a person that already gives up on all these areas in life or simply saying giving up or never care about the drama life brings. Which is very relevant in this age of time.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

It isn't weird actually coz its means that person has grown too mature in a short period of time.. T.. read more
YanZeros

11 Months Ago

you're welcome
It is a good poem in which you have mention three things that relate to human life. But your inclination is to negativity. I think you also should try to the positive aspect of these things. because the negativity is a dangerous object to our creative and critical writing. well written. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Oh feel free to critisize ☺
It would mean alot..
SZHZIA

11 Months Ago

oh, no. I do not criticize. I learn some new thoughts from every writers.
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Oh right 👍
This is stunning, the way it's raw & straightforward without being raunchy or bleak. This actually describes my life, after 60 years of being sucked into these 3 things which created nothing but stress & strife. Now I've gone super-simplified & I'm content for the first time in my life. What you're saying here is very true (for me), but I believe many people will think you're being sarcastic or slightly mocking of the average person's absolute need for these things. Most people wouldn't consider trying to live without even a very bad version of any one of these. I love your uniformity of style from stanza to stanza, but also making each stanza unique & not repetitive at all. This is thought-provoking & well-written.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree! While everyone has their experiences, this is one of those things too.. People did think I .. read more
Deep emotions are tricky terrain to avoid landmines at times, but so necessary in making us fully human, and therefore interesting. Think of the Stepford wives...scary! I think writing things down like this helps us process the intricacies of our many conflicted thoughts. love is tough at times, but so worth it when you find it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree! Mostly its the conflicts which urges one to write.. Thank you for your insight here! Truly .. read more
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BBP
I get exactly what you mean by this ... The character in my book lives by this mantra! Lol beautiful write

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thankyou for understanding the underlying feelings here! Could you tell me the book title of yours s.. read more
BBP

11 Months Ago

It's the grease and the gold ...and yes if
Course everyone feels that way sometime
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Okayy cool! Will go through it ☺
I wouldn't quite say emotions are useless to have. If we didn't have emotions, we'd never care, and to not care means danger. We need love to keep us afloat. If you're not loved, if you've not time for it... What are you? Sex. It's not particularly overrated. It can be if the person performing the act of has bad intentions. But if it's meant to please out of love, then I'd think not.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Well your point of view is appreciated.. Thank you for your insight.. ☺
Richard Mueller

11 Months Ago

Your acceptance of my point of view is appreciated. Thank you for being understanding, not bashful. .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Why would I be? Everyone has their own point of views which should be appreciated.. I do agree with .. read more

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