Restless

Restless

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

Settle down, will you?
I hear my heart's cries
I can't calm down
despite many tries
Restless.. Restless
The beats go
I can't control my emotions
From going wild

It's alright, isn't it?
I hear my brain call
Oh yes it is,
But only from the outside.
Running in turmoils,
My emotions churning
All the unsaid things 
Uptil now

Why, for the first time,
My heart and brain 
Seem on one page
While me?
I think, for too long, 
I have been in a cage

I guess it's time to fly....



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Such restless comes in everyone's life. We try to keep such inner restless away from ourselves, but we can not do it. I experienced such restless in my life. But time kept it away from me. Well written. keep it up. I love writings on such inner emotions of human being. Thanks for sharing.

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Szhzia

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree! Thank you so much for the kind words! Really appreciate it ☺
SZHZIA

11 Months Ago

welcome :-)



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Escape the cage and fly. Dont look back for anything at all.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Oh I already escaped, I think 😉 no looking back now...
Such restless comes in everyone's life. We try to keep such inner restless away from ourselves, but we can not do it. I experienced such restless in my life. But time kept it away from me. Well written. keep it up. I love writings on such inner emotions of human being. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree! Thank you so much for the kind words! Really appreciate it ☺
SZHZIA

11 Months Ago

welcome :-)
wow! its such beautiful writing. the conflict between the two essential processing factors, and when they are aligned with each other, it is a wonder indeed.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you! I agree..
Thank you for liking and reviewing this piece. It means alot ☺
A very powerful poem with strong emotional truths. Great descriptions...:)...............

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ☺
Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

You are welcome. ..::::))))
I like the ending! Not that I didn't like the other parts but the ending sounded very perfect for a peaceful mind. I think we all go through this period of life when we face battles with our inner self and we all know it's never easy to deal with them but with time and understanding we rise above those chains and fly higher with our newly formed wings... A very thoughtful write...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

And sometimes those newly formed winged are so often cut that we forget to soar.. Thank you Dhiman f.. read more
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Lovely flowing write, a restless soul longing for freedom. The analogy of a caged bird is fitting. I imagine when a soul is at peace, one can soar in more ways than one. I really enjoyed this friend. Starz x

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for liking and reviewing this piece, Starzy! I like your point of view on this :)
some very powerful lines. But ultimate objective is to free self - not from outer world but from bondages of mind. Good write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree! Thank you for your deep insight here.. Really appreciate it :)
If you built the cage, "it's time to fly."
If someone else built the cage, you should have already flown.
Either way, Kay, soar!
Lovely piece of writing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Interesting point of view, Jimmy! Never thought of it from that angle.. Thank you for the insight he.. read more
A better option than escape is to accept the way we are... Turmoil, like pain, can be good... driving us forward and preventing us from becoming too contented with our lot...

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You don't really know what it feels like...accepting the way we are is not an easy thing.. Thank you.. read more
Restless soul can be compared with a bird in a cage. It is a cage of emotions and a soul feels lika a prisoner.

Good description about Restless soul.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree with you! Thank you for understanding the feelings here and for reviewing ☺

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