Gone Forever

Gone Forever

A Chapter by Dr YumnaKay

It started like a thunder storm
Came as quick as it was gone
Something broken between them
Gone forever

He thought of giving her some time
To gain back her trust
And make her believe that it wasn't
Gone forever

She thought, If not this life,
Then it would be never
Better end it now or never 
Gone forever

And with one swipe of the blade 
She lay.. Her wrist cut
Down she went
Gone forever



© 2017 Dr YumnaKay



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Gone forever you say? I think she can be saved

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That would depend...
this is really good.....a harsh reality beautifully put down in words.....great job...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I think realities are harsh..
A disheartening tale told with a blend of tragedy and harsh reality, all it takes is a moment for things to fall apart. I love the flow of this poem and that message behind it. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Jack! Sometimes it's better to get back in reality..
I'm glad you liked it 😊
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

1 Year Ago

That I did and you're welcome!
This is so tragic, If only she can save herself from drowning deep into dark emotions. Very well written! Took me awhile to give a review. I only hope that she was able to survive and start again. YumnaKay :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hah well this is a fictional poem.. Thank you for liking 😊
YanZeros

1 Year Ago

you're welcome! :)
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Packed with emotion and written with passion. Starz x

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hey thank you for the appreciation, Starzy! Means a lot ☺
sad but touching. very well penned

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the kind words! Truly appreciated ☺
woh, unexpected ending! written with a passionate formula, the metaphoral depth reaches into the darkest of places! Great form!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Michael for your kind words! Truly appreciated ☺
It had never gone forever
It was just late
Something are not meant for us in this life

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well, yes you are right in a way.. Thank you for your views on this one ☺

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Added on December 14, 2016
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Dr YumnaKay
Dr YumnaKay

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