Pigeon

Pigeon

A Poem by zainul
"

Pigeons allure me to dream for peace

"
Happy pigeons fly

They are tumbling in the sky

Let's give peace a try

© 2012 zainul



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one time, they, gave peace a try, right on my head..

lovely little critters though.. there used to be a flock of 12 that buzzed around the neighborhood.. when my son was little he used to laugh when i called them, the dirty dozen which was an old army movie of a bunch o ne'r do wells haha

good stuff here my friend.. love the wonderful thought.. it brought back a great memory..

:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


I love this haiku! There's even rhyme, which is seldom found in pieces. This simplistic piece is still so enthralling!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

5 Years Ago

Thank you,Allyson,for the admiring review.
I feel very encouraged by your generous words.
what a beautiful Haiku, I love the free flying, tumbling feel of it...peace :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

5 Years Ago

Thank you,Corset for the admiring review.
Your lovely words add motion to the piece :)
Thanks for the inspiring review.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nice short poem! Even though so short it the way it's written and the style is beautiful! Good work!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on August 14, 2012
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Tags: happy, pigeons, fly, tumbling, sky, peace, try, allure, dream

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zainul
zainul

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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