HOW DOES IT FEEL ?

HOW DOES IT FEEL ?

A Poem by zaisham9393


HOW DOES IT FEEL?


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Life is complicated

And at times

We all get frustrated

But it can all turn around

Only if you want to

So, before you throw it all away

Try and find a way

It’s your choice

So speak your mind

Raise your voice

I believe in you

different stories

but the same issue

So don’t let anyone tell you

What to do…

Don’t let others control you

If you chose a different way

It’s your game, why let them play

Haters will hate even if you are right

They will find a reason to pick a fight

Don’t let them pull you down

You know why, only you know how

So just find that strength

It lies within me

It lies within you

We just need eyes to see

So see the other side of it

There's always a possibility

How does it feel?

To see things differently

To let your dreams fly

Till you touch the sky.




© 2016 zaisham9393



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"HOW DOES IT FEEL"
Zaisham,
Do you remember the song by Joni Mitchell, I think back the 70s? The main lyric I remember was: "I've looked at life from both sides now...."
Your poem of life is a wonderful view. It's portrayal of the commonality we all share is common and still unique for each person.
Your last strong message to we people of affirmation and encouragement is so well spoken and needed:
"To see things differently
To let your dreams fly
Till you touch the sky."
Lovely poem in it's understanding and kind message.
Bless you much.
Kathy


Posted 10 Months Ago


Beautiful message behind an amazing piece!
Well done
Aphy!

Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You :)!!
A most delicious piece that unfortunately leaves one with a willing need to continue.

Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!!
Very well written. I like the message conveyed through the poem.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!!
inspiring piece, daring but that what makes it inspirational. Nice work

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!!
I did enjoy this one. As with your other poems, it inspired me with a strong message. The question "how does it feel" sets one's imagination free.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!!
I love your poem, very emotional and creative. Nicely penned.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!!
Blackstar

2 Years Ago

Your welcome. :)
absolutely true,it makes one feel the strength of nature.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!!
Apparently I have been under a rock as I missed this beautiful work expounding the truth and very positive uplifting message. Thank you for sharing your words. Well done.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!!
I like your poem. Breaking free from the chains of the past. Now you can really experience life to it's fullest without boundary. Nicely written. Keep writing.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!!

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