EVERY NIGHT OF EVERYDAY...

EVERY NIGHT OF EVERYDAY...

A Poem by zaisham9393

EVERY NIGHT OF

...EVERYDAY...

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Every night of everyday

I wake up feeling the same way

I feel so broken

Give me a sign, I've lost my direction

 

 I don’t want to be an empty soul

Without an ambition; with no goal

 I need to find a way

To get through this day

 

I’m running out of words

And you are running out of patience

I just want you to know

 that I love you


So hold my hand and let me know

You won't ever let go

cause I'm hanging by a thread

Between Life and Death



with million question my mind

I can see, but I am blind

I need the strength to carry on

Until all this darkness is gone

 

So be my light in the dark

Cause you have that spark

I can't change reality

So today only you can save me

 

I am scared, but I don't want to be

Please don’t hurt me

Please don’t leave me

It’s getting too dark to see

 

Remember when you told me

You would always be there for me

I trust you so don't leave me

Cause this love is priceless,  but it sets us free.



© 2016 zaisham9393



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All people will struggle.
"Please don’t ever leave me
I am scared; it’s too dark to see
Just stay with me
Until the day, death sets me free."
All of us need a kind word and a friendly face near. Hard to find purpose to go forward. But we must. I liked the honest and thoughts and struggled described leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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Zaisham !!! i don't have words to describe the beauty of this poem ... all i can say that my heart melt into the flow of this poem
i love your works
thank you so much for sharing such a lovely work
10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000% outstanding work

Posted 1 Year Ago


I liked the last stanza. You struck home with it. Keep it up. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


A shining piece that relates well from screen to mind, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Interesting metaphor

How you compared being alive to being in some type of captivity

And then where you concluded with "Until the day, death sets me free."

Usually

When I start to head towards that road I immediately try to wake my self up.

All in all

I really liked it.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))!!!!
Quite touching Good work.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))!!!!
I feel this really strong connection to your poem n I felt the same way when i read what if you are next. If this is even slightly inspired by something personal then i totally get you and we might just be sailing in the same boat. Lolz. If not though.... well it was a great piece and highly "relateable". i loved it. Thankyou for sharing!

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))!!!!
Optimism is the way to live. But sometimes, life gets so hard, that one cannot imagine happiness, at least, not getting it on his own. And then we dream and expect to let others be optimistic about us. For them to set us free. To make us feel good. It is bad, but it is good too. A beautiful piece.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much ;)!!
This is so emotional, really well written, you have an amazing way with words and the use of contrast. Good job!!!

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much ;)!!
You have a way with words Loved it!!! Awesome

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much ;)!!
Now this is real...real love waiting for an unfold of another love. Wish you luck and hope you will off the light soon. beautiful lines! thax for sharing

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Posted 2 Years Ago


zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You :)!!!!!!!!

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