EVERY NIGHT OF EVERYDAY...

EVERY NIGHT OF EVERYDAY...

A Poem by zaisham9393

EVERY NIGHT OF

...EVERYDAY...

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Every night of everyday

I wake up feeling the same way

I feel so broken

Give me a sign, I've lost my direction

 

 I don’t want to be an empty soul

Without an ambition; with no goal

 I need to find a way

To get through this day

 

I’m running out of words

And you are running out of patience

I just want you to know

 that I love you


So hold my hand and let me know

You won't ever let go

cause I'm hanging by a thread

Between Life and Death



with million question my mind

I can see, but I am blind

I need the strength to carry on

Until all this darkness is gone

 

So be my light in the dark

Cause you have that spark

I can't change reality

So today only you can save me

 

I am scared, but I don't want to be

Please don’t hurt me

Please don’t leave me

It’s getting too dark to see

 

Remember when you told me

You would always be there for me

I trust you so don't leave me

Cause this love is priceless,  but it sets us free.



© 2016 zaisham9393



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All people will struggle.
"Please don’t ever leave me
I am scared; it’s too dark to see
Just stay with me
Until the day, death sets me free."
All of us need a kind word and a friendly face near. Hard to find purpose to go forward. But we must. I liked the honest and thoughts and struggled described leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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I felt the suffocating struggle of life with life!
Touching and amazingly penned!!
Really heartfelt! Liked it very much! :)

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You Jyoti ;)!!!
Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

You are welcome..
Beautiful way with words. No one else writes like you. :) 100 points. Very well done sis.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thanks ;)!!
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

:-) youre welcome:-)
Beautifully written words of emptiness and loneliness. As questions of love and happiness runs through the mind. Life does feel more complete when our love is near and holding us.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much ;)!!
sometimes things got complicated ...different options still exist ...choose your one and let your life to move in a different direction ..@zaisham 9393 vivid and imagery thoughts pouncing from your perfect brain..carry on...

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dexterous sam

2 Years Ago

u r welcome sometime it is good to put your expression in words.....lol :)))))
zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

maybe I do have a perfect brain..LOL :DD....
dexterous sam

2 Years Ago

now u got it ..it's my perception ...
This quite captures the pinnacle of a relationship gone wrong. Body and mind both react in strange way when you are heart broken. Mind tries to convince but heart refuses to accept the reality.

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zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Than You so much dear friend ;))
All people will struggle.
"Please don’t ever leave me
I am scared; it’s too dark to see
Just stay with me
Until the day, death sets me free."
All of us need a kind word and a friendly face near. Hard to find purpose to go forward. But we must. I liked the honest and thoughts and struggled described leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

Thank You so much :))
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Very moving. I loved this line "I am scared; it’s too dark to see". Life is scary but it's so much more bearable when there's someone to hold hands with. Thanks for sharing Z. :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

2 Years Ago

You are right ...thats exactly what I believe :)....Thank You.

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