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   How much it sucks to be misunderstood?

How much it sucks to be misunderstood?

A Poem by zaisham9393

 

How much it sucks to be misunderstood?


You can’t see me…

Or feel how it feels to be me…

Silence screams…

Silence speaks…

Can anyone hear?

Silent tears…

Does anyone care?

Can you hear me?

Is there anyone there?

I’m scattered in pieces…

It doesn’t matter…

So, go ahead and judge me…

At the end of the day;

You will have your opinion anyway

I’ve tried everything I could;

If there was a way I could show you…

What’s inside my heart I would...?

And I could tell you…

How much it sucks to be misunderstood…



© 2016 zaisham9393



Author's Note

zaisham9393
Bad day...just needed to get it off my chest...

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first of all yes someone cares, and it might tear them apart to know how much your hurting.
yes someone can see you and can feel how your feeling, someone loves you and wish you nothing but happiness, because you deserve to be happy
there is someone out there. no, there is more than someone out there who believes in you, and they see how amazing you are.
second of all it is okay to cry sometimes, believe in yourself, trust yourself, and speak louder. because it is your life and only you can make it wonderful.you don't need to show anyone anything, don't listen to what other people say
you are perfect the way you are and no one and i mean NO ONE has the right to judge you or misunderstand you.
third of all this poem is so amazing, i love it, and i read it more than three times before writing this
and tell you what.... this one goes right to my favorites, your an amazing writer, great job XD

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank You so much sweetie :)!!



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No one can know what we've been through except ourselves. Very relatable piece of poetry, I liked it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Few people will try to understand us.
"And I could tell you…
How much it sucks to be misunderstood…"
I believe we must find things we love. Today. No-one know me and I'm fine with this. I have my poetry and I have talented writers like you to keep me motivated. A powerful poem. You left something for the reader to ponder.
Coyote




Posted 1 Year Ago


zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank You so much for this amazing review:).
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my friend.
So sorry to hear you are having a bad day.Your poem shows your true feelings and I wish I could give you a hug. I will pray for you. Eva

Posted 1 Year Ago


zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :))!!!!!!!!
You know, this was very well written; though I think the last line is unnecessary, because the rest of the poem speaks for itself, and it kind of throws the flow off a little bit..feels 'out-of-place'. So far, this was my favorite one of yours.. The rhyme-scheme and the flow of the poem was nice, and yes, I've my share of those "off" days, where everything just feels weird and out-of-place. Writing is my medicine and how I vent, too. Thank you. (=

Posted 1 Year Ago


zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank You so much for the review :)!
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hi
now that came from the heart, loved how you rhymed it :)
and i know what it is like to be miunderstood alot of people do, i learned that the more i was online


Posted 1 Year Ago


Your words go straight to the heart of the emotions. And everyone can relate. I think we've all felt that no one hears us or listens or cares. I remember feeling invisible as a child, misunderstood without words such as this to express myself.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for the review Jennie :)!
I doubt that even if we could communicate directly mind to mind, bypassing the dismal ability of words, removing the weight of individual life experience, we would find that understanding would truly be possible. I think the best we can hope for is a few relationships where we can feel free to speak and act without the fear of harsh judgement, where we can share trust and acceptance, where we can be ourselves.
The work is well structured, and the flow is interesting, changing pace with out disrupting the communication.

Posted 1 Year Ago


We have all been there, it is how you deal with it that matters. You should read my poem "Troubled Times" I don't know if it will help but it might make you look at future bad day differently. Always a pleasure to read your work as they make me think Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 1 Year Ago


zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank You dearest friend :))!!!!!!!
Well I am sorry you had a bad day. I hope you are okay though. I know how it is to be misunderstood. If they don't like what they see or hear or whatever they don't deserve the right to judge. They don't know what or where someone is coming from so before whoever they think they are judge maybe they should look inside themselves first. Other people don't matter it only matters what you think. I wish you all the happiness in the world. But remember it's okay to cry because it's your party and you can cry if you want to. =) Your poem is just amazing by the way =) I am so glad I stumbled upon it =)

Posted 1 Year Ago


zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Thank You so much :))!
We are all misunderstood in some way or another. Even those who seem perfect & seem to have their lives together. It's okay to be misunderstood because only few will know the 'real us'. Not every person you meet deserves to hear your life story or have a chance to hold your heart because soon enough, they will do what they can to take advantage of it. We should always hold our hearts close & wait for the true ones to open up to. Not every one is as kind as we believe or wish them to be, which is such a shame, but true. Stay strong & don't bother trying to change yourself just to make people see or understand you. In the end, all you have is yourself to depend on.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Hi, I am Zaisha. Well, I would start by saying that writing is one of my passions, and a way to cope with feeling overwhelmed. Also, I have been working on improving my writing skills and this woul.. more..

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