'Glimpse of our Story’

'Glimpse of our Story’

A Poem by zaisham9393

'Glimpse of our Story’



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Swirling thoughts and emotions

When it feels like life is spinning out of control

I can see you smile, but your eyes tell a different story

It would be so much easier; only if there was a cure for worry


 

I know how you feel

You get hurt, you say these words

You flip out

Anger is your only way out...

 

anger, fear, hurt and pain act as a shield

when mind turns into a battlefield

every mistake

real or fake...

 

leads you in a desperate

attempt to retrieve

you and I, we both know

some things, we just can’t let go...

 

divine wounds can’t be healed

empty places can’t ever be filled

like a fog in the clarity

this gives birth to insecurity...

 

as you dig deeper

behind every layer

our past, our history, our perception of reality

shows us a ‘Glimpse of our Story'



© 2017 zaisham9393



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The first 4 lines set the tone for me in this piece.I found them to be very relate able. It is hard not to worry sometimes cuz you want the best outcome.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


So close to home it's scary. But it's depth is felt thank you excellent

Posted 1 Month Ago


I love the lyrical, song-like quality of this poem. And it is so perceptive about the pain that lies so close to the surface in all of us.

Posted 2 Months Ago


zaisham9393

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much Jennie :)!
retrieve or retreat but never give up
a happy heart, a lovable grump
i did like this poem, i love the way it
gently taps and raps at my back

Posted 3 Months Ago


This poem consists of some reflections of a true story written with true emotions and feelings. I love way in which you have worded the story in simple language. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 3 Months Ago


"Only if there was a cure for worry"
So true. I really can relate to this poem. I think it is really good. I like your play on words and I think that there are a lot of messages that we can all take away from this one! Thanks for writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


zaisham9393

3 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and the review :)!
wonderful piece of write...excellent choice of words and mind-blowing flow of thoughts!! I loved this!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Yeah, I agree with capolavoro. I like how the mystery crawls at your poetry. But lacking more impact for me, though. Like saying the right words at the right time. Well, that's for me, though. ^^, Keep writing! :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


i like the thinking processes that went into the making of this poem, very well done for me.

Posted 3 Months Ago


I cannot believe that English is your second language. You use words wonderfully! Well done here. =)

Posted 3 Months Ago



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Hi, I am Zaisha. Well, I would start by saying that writing is one of my passions, and a way to cope with feeling overwhelmed. Also, I have been working on improving my writing skills and this woul.. more..

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