'Glimpse of our Story’

'Glimpse of our Story’

A Poem by zaisham9393

'Glimpse of our Story’



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Swirling thoughts and emotions

When it feels like life is spinning out of control

I can see you smile, but your eyes tell a different story

It would be so much easier; only if there was a cure for worry


 

I know how you feel

You get hurt, you say these words

You flip out

Anger is your only way out...

 

anger, fear, hurt and pain act as a shield

when mind turns into a battlefield

every mistake

real or fake...

 

leads you in a desperate

attempt to retrieve

you and I, we both know

some things, we just can’t let go...

 

divine wounds can’t be healed

empty places can’t ever be filled

like a fog in the clarity

this gives birth to insecurity...

 

as you dig deeper

behind every layer

our past, our history, our perception of reality

shows us a ‘Glimpse of our Story'



© 2017 zaisham9393



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Very nice. Most identifiable


Posted 5 Months Ago


The first 4 lines set the tone for me in this piece.I found them to be very relate able. It is hard not to worry sometimes cuz you want the best outcome.

Posted 8 Months Ago


So close to home it's scary. But it's depth is felt thank you excellent

Posted 9 Months Ago


I love the lyrical, song-like quality of this poem. And it is so perceptive about the pain that lies so close to the surface in all of us.

Posted 10 Months Ago


zaisham9393

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Jennie :)!
retrieve or retreat but never give up
a happy heart, a lovable grump
i did like this poem, i love the way it
gently taps and raps at my back

Posted 11 Months Ago


This poem consists of some reflections of a true story written with true emotions and feelings. I love way in which you have worded the story in simple language. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 11 Months Ago


"Only if there was a cure for worry"
So true. I really can relate to this poem. I think it is really good. I like your play on words and I think that there are a lot of messages that we can all take away from this one! Thanks for writing!

Posted 11 Months Ago


zaisham9393

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and the review :)!
wonderful piece of write...excellent choice of words and mind-blowing flow of thoughts!! I loved this!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Yeah, I agree with capolavoro. I like how the mystery crawls at your poetry. But lacking more impact for me, though. Like saying the right words at the right time. Well, that's for me, though. ^^, Keep writing! :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


i like the thinking processes that went into the making of this poem, very well done for me.

Posted 11 Months Ago



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