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SHE RISES...

A Poem by zaisham9393

SHE RISES

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She told things he thought would never hear

Maybe, he underestimated her all those years


She poured out her heart

And he always ripped it apart

The darkness surrounded

As the poison of love suffocated her

Her dreams crumbled down

She sat by the door

Waiting to hear no more


He said, she let him down

But soon realized

It was the other way around

She was more than a pretty face

She had the key to win this race

She was the reason he was alive

She was heaven in his nightmare


When he realized, as he opened his eyes

How much he needed her

How he missed the way they once were

He hated himself for what he said to her

He needed her to face the light as much as to escape death

She gave him a choice

Cold words, but familiar voice


Find a way to lit the spark

Before the poison grows in this dark

As together they played with their disguises

his time to fall

makes you wonder...


ain't life full of shocking surprises

He fades as she rises.





© 2017 zaisham9393



Author's Note

zaisham9393
Hope you liked this one :D!
Plz.read/rate/review
Thank you :)!

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Another powerful truth in life. Unfortunately, some people never grow up mentally and emotionally until they lose what they always took for granted. Yet, as you level up, they covet you more. Its an interesting and puzzling dynamic at times. Excellent writing and keep making more. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


This had a very rhythmic flow to it and it was very nice to read. Thank you for sharing it with me!

Posted 5 Months Ago


This is written beautifully, and structured really well. It has that whole feeling of how people don't realize what they have until it's gone. I love the last line and the title and how it all ties together. Great job!

Posted 5 Months Ago


I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. It was beautiful

Posted 6 Months Ago


The story told. Took my breath away. Thank you...

Posted 6 Months Ago


"He fades as she rises"
i should probably say you put the beauty in poetry - but then you you'll probably roll your eyes and sigh: 'what a line'.
your poetry truly is beautiful, and simple - also a tad melancholic (who gives a f*** right?) - and likeable. Nice :)


Posted 7 Months Ago


zaisham9393

7 Months Ago

I agree :D!
Ego destroys all! and this verse expresses it clearly. A lesson to be learnt here! Good job.

Posted 7 Months Ago


zaisham9393

7 Months Ago

More than ego, selsfishness and taking someone for granted is to blame !
thank you for review.. read more
Powerful use of description. You made the scene come alive for the reader. I enjoyed the tale and the proper ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


Reads like a familiar tale but oh, so well expressed. That is exactly how it happens.
"ain't life full of shocking surprises", aye, so it is... Nicely penned, Z (:

Posted 7 Months Ago


zaisham9393

7 Months Ago

Not more than you Dr.! you and your work are awesome :)!Thank you for reading :)!

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Hi, I am Zaisha. Well, I would start by saying that writing is one of my passions, and a way to cope with feeling overwhelmed. Also, I have been working on improving my writing skills and this woul.. more..

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