' A Fight '

' A Fight '

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye

The Fire is Flaming.
Burning Up. 
The Anger is Anxious. 
Ready to Erupt. 
Patience is Fleeting. 
Leaving a Hole. 
Void of all Feeling. 
Becoming Cold. 

The Fire is Flaming. 
Burning Down. 
Anger Devouring... 
Anything around. 
There is no more Patience. 
Rage is Here. 
Gone is Positive. 
Joy Disappeared. 

Vision going Blank. 
Darkness Encompassing. 
Rage going Wild. 
Blood Imagining. 
No Conscious. 
No Justice. 
No Reality. 
Going Ballistic Toward the Enemy.
 

© 2010 Hello, Goodbye


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Wow!
Powerfully worded friend
I like the structure to this a lot!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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