Susie : Writing

Chapter 8

Chapter 8

A Chapter by Susie


As soon as appropriate, I left my parents at the table, stacked our dishes in the dishwasher and scurried to my bedroom. I often sought serenity at th..
Chapter 9

Chapter 9

A Chapter by Susie


Squeezed between Cris and Alissa, I convinced myself comfortable. Whatever boundaries Cris and I conquered inanyformer delusionalimaginings did not in..
Chapter 10 - Fourteen Months Later

Chapter 10 - Fourteen Months Later

A Chapter by Susie


I was always struck by the scene in "Pearl Harbour" when the island was plagued by bomb-ridden bodies, many on their last leg. The hospital was so dra..
Chapter 11

Chapter 11

A Chapter by Susie


Barely home from their honeymoon, Lucy and her new husband opened the screen door at Grandma's hollered consent, and stepped into the morbid crowd. Sh..
Chapter 12

Chapter 12

A Chapter by Susie


Home.I resented the fact that I'ddriven. The fifteen minutes alone in the car with Cris faking appreciation for his support was intense. For the first..
Chapter 13

Chapter 13

A Chapter by Susie


A private body viewing, a stressful black attire shop and nine days later the farmhouse was all a hustle again. I was tired of functioning around so m..
Chapter 14

Chapter 14

A Chapter by Susie


Walking from the front pews to the hearsegave us atruer idea of how many had shown for the occasion. That was, A LOT.We spilled out of the exit like a..
Chapter 15

Chapter 15

A Chapter by Susie


Today wasTHAT day.I dressed for Church. I looked at my reflection. I dressed again. Clothes slowly formed a second carpet over my bedroom floor. The f..
One month married

One month married

A Chapter by Susie


Cris's and my wedding day was the best day of my life.Virgin sex was like... virgin sex.Day one was... bliss.And day two was...I sat on the gorgeous, ..
Three months married

Three months married

A Chapter by Susie


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